Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Most Helpful Concepts
Tuesday, May 12, 2009
Self-Evaluation #3
I enjoyed this last speech as I was able to research and discuss a topic I was interested in and then attempt to persuade others to take action and change the current status. Also, because I received such great feedback on the previous speeches, I was able to incorporate those critiques into this third and final essay.
Because I received a lot of information to back up my argument and to convince others to take a stand, I was able to clearly address the purpose of my speech. I talked about the current problem, presented the audience with a number of solutions, and stressed just how important it is to exercise. Although I was a little shaky, I was confident in my speech and knew that after the audience heard my speech many would be convinced to get up and exercise. Because we had two other speeches prior to the last, I was very comfortable speaking in front of the class.
Although I did improve in this speech from the last two speeches, there were still a few things that I could have done better. In support and delivery I think I did a very good job however I could have made improvements in organization and preparation. When making the outline I did not follow full instructions so it was not organized in the way it should have been. In result, I had to work on my outline some more so that I would ensure that my delivery and purpose was clear. Therefore, my preparation time was cut short.
There are several things I did differently in this speech but I will list the most important ones. For the previous speeches I brought in something for the media as opposed to composing and presenting a powerpoint. Based on the feedback from my classmates it was evident that the powerpoint was a stronger piece of media as it helped the audience to follow along and they enjoyed the photos. Also, I practice my speech several times with my powerpoint (unlike the other speeches) so I was able to get down my timing. Those were the biggest changes I made in this speech from the other two.
I do not think I had any obvious distractions but there were a few minor ones that could have affected the audience’s attention. When I present in front of a group I have the tendency to sometimes shake a bit (out of nervousness) so I was shaking a little bit. To try to calm my nerves down I walked around the class a bit which made actually seem like I was trying to engage with my audience. So in turn, my nerves actually benefited my speech.
Although I did use a few note-cards I tried to make sure I made contact with my audience as much as possible. After watching my tape I saw that my note-card use was much less than the previous two speeches. If I were to rate my eye-contact on a scale from 1-10 I would give it an 8. It was good, but it was not great. I would only rate it a 9 or 10 if I did not use note-cards at all. Overall I think I achieved the purpose of my speech pretty good. If I were to grade the speech on a scale from A-F I would give it a B+ or A-. I think I proved that there was a problem and did a good job convincing the audience to take a stand. Also I gave within almost all of the guidelines of my speech requirement and most importantly I improved.
This speech was indeed better than my last. I was much more prepared, confident, organized, presentable, and I delivered the purpose very clearly. What I did in this speech, that I didn’t the last, was smoothly incorporated five sources which gave my speech some credibility. Also I know that this speech was better than the last because after reading my classmates feedback it was clear that they enjoyed my speech and that they were affected by it.
After reviewing all three speeches I noticed some errors and a lot of positives in all three speeches. In the first speech, I was happy with my confidence as it was my first speech, but I was unhappy with my citing of sources and my media display. In my second speech I was happy with my pitch and tone, as well as confidence, however my media display was still lacking. In the last speech I believe that I nearly mastered the concepts that I was lacking in the first two speeches which is why I am convinced that overall I did a much better job in my last speech making it the best of the three.
Future Endeavours
This class has been a big learning experience for me as I made errors but most importantly, learned from them. At first I was a little nervous to speak in front of the class because I do not normally speak in front of a large group. After learning all of the concepts in the wonderful book we bought, I feel that I almost mastered the art of public speaking. I learned how to get my audience's attention, I learned how and when to use visuals, I learned about projection, and so many more aspects that make up a great speaker. Of all of the things that I learned I will use the outline. Although I have written several outlines before, never have I written in so much detail and organization because it was not required in my others classes. And although I do not like writing drafts or outlines, I came to learn that this was the most helpful aspect in my speech preparation as well as during the speech. It kept me on track and was the key to my success in the class.
Monday, May 11, 2009
Favorite Speech
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Useful Chapter Information
I liked chapter 16 which was about special occasion and group speaking. This was helpful because in the future I am hoping to have several special occasion and group speeches. For example, my boyfriend is graduating after this semester is over and his family is throwing a huge banquet for him and I will be speaking. This chapter taught me to celebrate what someone has already done well and since he is a first generation college student, his parents are very proud of him. I have to make sure to be entertaining and lighthearted as make sure to focus on a theme.
Since many classes involve group speaking this chapter was helpful because it provided useful information on presenting in small groups. It talked about working together and practicing together to ensure that the presentation flows together and to feel more comfortable.
Thursday, April 30, 2009
Speech Buddies
year of homeschooling. The first speaker was for homeschooling and she stressed the importance of children attending college. She was very persuasive and believed that since family is very influencial on their child's education, then homeschool is a very good option. I agree that homeschool will prepare you for college because when my sister did homeschool for a year her grades were very high but she complained about not getting the social aspect of school which is needed I believe. As far as the second speaker, he had some persuasive points in the sense that parents have a big enough job trying to raise you why would they add on teaching. They have jobs and other things to be responsible for which is why teachers should help fill in this void.
Personally, I think that homeschooling is an option that should be determined by the child. Every child is unique and some are fit for this type of schooling while others may perform better in a school. It all depends.
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
Recent Persuasive Discussion
Recently I had a persuasive discussion with my two other soon-to-be roommates about our apartment living situation. When we arrived at a potential apartment, we were talking to the manager and questioning the pricings and several other questions. However, my other two roommates are inexperienced and are in a rush to just get approved for an apartment now since we will have to move out of the campus apartments soon.
The lady was telling us that we had to all sign one lease and that we could not sign individual leases. I found a problem with that because there are many active court cases right now in which college students are suing their roommates because something happened and the other roommates stopped paying the rest of their lease leaving the balance on the other roommate. I asked the lady if it was possiblity for us to all get individual leases however my potential roommates were telling me to let it go and that the lady already said no.
I kept pleading my case however, and I stressed the importance of individual leasing because if anything happens I want us to be accountable for only ourselves. Finally after using cause-and-effect reasoning I was finally able to get it through my roommates heads as well as the apartment supervisor. In result we were able to sign individual leases.
Saturday, April 25, 2009
Chapter 14 Useful Information
Friday, April 24, 2009
Next Speech
The main points of my next speech include: why should you exercise, what are the potential advantages and disadvantages, and how to exercise. I plan on beginning my speech with a shocking statistic that will one get the audience's attention, and two persuade them that there needs to be a change. I plan on ending the speech by reviewing my main points and emphasizing the severity or importance of exercising. I am going to persuade my audience towards my point of view by giving factual information from credible sources that will make it easy to persuade my audience to consider my point of view. Also by explaining the advantages as well as the disadvantages it will help my audience see that I am not being bias and that I am giving all of the sides, not just the good ones. However, I feel that the positives tremendously outweigh the negatives so I am convinced that my audience will take in the information I give and hopefully apply it to their lives.
Thursday, April 23, 2009
Immersed in a Sea of Persuasion
Through public speaking and mass media contexts a lot of information is presented. Most of the time the speaker fails to discuss potential negatives of the product of whatever is being represented which makes it easier for me to reject. I know nothing is perfect so unless I hear the cons I am not persuaded. However I am not close-minded so I give everyone the chance to present something to me and I will not say they are right or wrong.
To become a more critical consumer I can try to lighten my idea that "everyone has a secret agenda or is trying to get over" because that is not true. Also I think I can continue to be inquisitive because the more questions you ask to the less indeterminable you will be.
Saturday, April 18, 2009
Speech Buddy Videos Response
Friday, April 17, 2009
Flickr
After viewing the comments on Flickr I was pretty interested and somewhat surprised at some of the comments that were being made about "sexist language". Although most people do not think that calling a woman a "girl” or a man a "boy" can be offensive, I can think of some situations where those terms can be pretty disrespectful. For example, if there is an older man or woman and you introduce them to someone else by saying "hi this girl/boy is (and then state their name". The older person will be offended because it will seem as though you do not respect them.
Also I can see if someone calls a girl a "tom-boy" that can be sort of sexist because that means you automatically assume that girls are supposed to dress a certain way and are not supposed to be into sports or other activities that would be considered "boy-ish".
On the other hand, I believe that terms do not necessarily have to be defined as "sexist language" because it all depends on the person’s intentions. So in conclusion I would be careful when using words that can sound "sexist" to ensure that others do not get offended.
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Ch. 12 Useful/Interesting Concepts
In chapter 12, I liked the section on impromptu speaking because it is speaking with little or no preparation which is how everyone converses everyday. "Learning how to express yourself on the spot without relying on research, extensive preparation, or notes will help you do well in your public speaking class and in less structured speaking situations beyond the classroom." (pg 229) I think this concept can come in handy when giving speeches because that way a few parts can be more relaxed as opposed to sounding scripted.
Some tips for managing your voice during your speech include include: speak loudly enough, vary your rate pitch and volume, avoid vocalized pauses and articulate your words clearly and pronounce them correctly. All these tips come in handy because i notice from my last speeches I sometime had a problem variating my rate pitch and volume so I am going to pay attention to the rest of these so that I can better my delivery.
Saturday, April 11, 2009
Chapter 11
One concept that I found interesting were the different types of visual aids and media presentations. There is almost no limit to a visual aid since technology is so advanced, some examples include: white boards, chalk boards, over head slides, video clips, sound clips, and etc. Also when using PowerPoint (since that is one of the most effective visual aids) you can add video clips, music, clip art, or other digital images that are easy to insert and help keep the audience engaged and can help create relevance to your topic. The chapter also taught me to be well organized on each slide and to not write out all your points completely as it gets distracting for one the audience to look up and start reading it. So for my next speech I plan to use a video clip on my PowerPoint and to only put a few bullet points on each slide so that I can have a reference to what I am saying and so that the audience can easily follow along.
Friday, April 10, 2009
Self-Evaluation #2
I think I achieved the purpose of me speech very well as several times I stated what the purpose was and I feel that I my topics summed it up as well. During the speech I was very confident and comfortable because I felt relaxed and knowledgeable about the topic since I did a lot of research on it. If I had to do it over again, I would improve on my preparation and organization. Although I was prepared to give my speech, I need to improve on preparing with everything needed such as the visual aid, and bringing a video tape! As far as organization I will improve on my time-management because I went over the limit by a few minutes so I am going to be more organized next speech.
I think the content of my speech was pretty good, but I can improve on the emphasis of the key points so that the important concepts are apparent. To improve on the delivery of the speech, I can slow down a bit as I tend to talk fast sometimes which can make the speech sound rushed and distract the audience from the points. From my last speech I think I improved on my delivery and stating my sources. Unfortunately I still spoke a little too fast at some points so I am going to be more conscious of that in my next speech and make the needed changes. It was probably distracting when I looked at my note-cards and I did use a few “umms” here and there. However I do think I looked at my note-cards a lot less than I did the first time so that is definitely and improvement.
On a scale from 1-10 I would rate my eye-contact a 7.5. I think I did a good job looking at the audience but with more practice I could have been less dependant on my note-cards. On a scale from A-F I think I deserve a B- because I think overall I did a good job and I showed several improvements from my last speech which I got a C+ on. Those improvements include but are not limited to: delivery, and research. I mentioned four different sources in my speech. This speech was a lot better than my last speech as I had a better overall delivery and preparation than the last speech.
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Speech to my Family
Also, Professor Perez noted that at times I did speech fast which did not allow me to put emphasis on certain topics. I did catch myself doing that at times, so I made sure to slow down a bit when speaking in front of my family that way they could grasp the essential points. Overall I do believe that I improved on this speech in front of my family because of the feedback I got. I was able to see what I could improve on and apply that changes to my speech in front of my family in which they thought was "very good."
If I had to do the speech all over again, I would create and present a power point presentation because I think that would be a much better visual aid than the one I previously used. Also, I would be more time conscious as I exceeded the allotted time by a couple of minutes. After receiving feedback I was very much so able to improve my speech because I was able to get another perspective on what could be improved which made it easy for me to apply those constructive criticisms the second time around when presenting in front of my family. This exercise was very helpful because I used the feedback that was given to me which made it easy for me to see that I am really capable of presenting a powerful speech.
Saturday, March 21, 2009
Speech Buddies
Components of Introduction and Conclusion
Wednesday, March 18, 2009
Interesting Concepts Ch's 9 and 13
As we all know, this book has been very helpful in the preparation for our speeches, so I would like to pick out some concepts from Chapters 9 and 13 that were interesting to me. Chapter 9 basically showed the way to begin and end our speeches. I liked the section about creativity because although I am a pretty creative person, I sometimes forget to utilize my abilities to stand out when it comes to giving a speech. This section helped me to rememeber that standing out (attention grabber) is an effective way to gain the audiences attention. Also I liked the section about credibility because it stating sources is another good way to keep audience engaged and believe what you are saying. Chapter 13 had many interesting topics as it prepared us for our upcoming speech on informative speaking but I will only state a few. I liked the section about informative speaking being accurate because often times when people give informative speeches they forget that there opinion should not be implemented. The speech should be factual. Also, the many different patterns of informative speeches are good to look at and I am probably going to try to use the Narrative pattern (pg. 340) on my next speech.
Saturday, March 14, 2009
Discussion Week 8 topic 2
Friday, March 13, 2009
Week 8 Discussion Question 1
Friday, March 6, 2009
Self Evaluation #1
Saturday, February 21, 2009
Speech Buddies
In the drinking video, Matthew talks about the dangers of drinking and driving and he gives statistics showing the accident rates of drinking. He also used an overheard, which I think is perfect for visual because in case people get lost are confused, they can always refer to the notes. Matthew did a great job presenting his purpose, which was to teach people about drinking responsibly to avoid tragedies and accidents.
The light pollution video was kind of boring. Although she explained what she was talking about which was light pollution and how we are affected by it, nothing really caught my attention.
Basically from these videos I learned to have good visual aids and to look attentive and not nervous.
Helpful Chapter Information
Friday, February 20, 2009
Audience Analysis and Audience Adaption
Saturday, February 14, 2009
Useful Chapter Information
Chapter 6 Video
Thursday, February 12, 2009
Discussion Week 4.1 Research Interviews
Thursday, January 29, 2009
Introduction
I am a sophomore from Sacramento, CA and this is my 2nd year at San Jose State University. I decided to attend this school because I absolutely love the campus and heard great things about it. I am enrolled in Comm 20 because it fulfils a GE requirement and also I enjoy public speaking. The reason I am taking it online is because I have a busy work and class schedule and this fits in perfectly as I have taken a loved online classes prior to this one.
I have taken a different public speaking course here and also enjoyed it (Comm 40). I do not have fears of public speaking however sometimes I tend to lose my train of thought when speaking in front a group of people so I'm hoping to improve in that area as this class progresses. I look forward to reading everyones work!
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